Post by tranz on May 28, 2007 11:31:19 GMT -5
Yo One day I tried to write a rap and it came out like this... Its like an urban version of Weird Al...Criticism would be appreciated.
:Tranz: Story
By: Ruairi Mulgrew
I’m like RJD2,
Spittin’ rhymes and verses,
While you’re sitting on the toilet taking a poo!
My rhymes are deadly like a suicide bomb,
Blowing your head off while I f**k your mom!
The Shwa is my hood,
Word it’s no joke,
My homies are there and it’s where I sell coke.
Sprayin’ Graffiti by day,
Killing n*gga’s by night,
Ruairi’s life is illmatically tight!
For me Graffiti is an addiction,
I just can’t stop,
Doing pieces on walls and tagging up cop cars,
My sh*t is dope nothing wrong bout that,
But when I tag my anxiety is high,
Running from Security Officers n sh*t
I be taggin till i die
I know the last couple of verses didn’t rhyme,
But nobody’s perfect,
I make mistakes from time to time,
But it doesn’t stop me from dropping the dimes.
That’s the end of my rap,
Scars swell on my back,
From being forced to the ground by Cops when I got caught doing Graff,
Word
x Tranz 4 Life x
:Tranz: Story
By: Ruairi Mulgrew
I’m like RJD2,
Spittin’ rhymes and verses,
While you’re sitting on the toilet taking a poo!
My rhymes are deadly like a suicide bomb,
Blowing your head off while I f**k your mom!
The Shwa is my hood,
Word it’s no joke,
My homies are there and it’s where I sell coke.
Sprayin’ Graffiti by day,
Killing n*gga’s by night,
Ruairi’s life is illmatically tight!
For me Graffiti is an addiction,
I just can’t stop,
Doing pieces on walls and tagging up cop cars,
My sh*t is dope nothing wrong bout that,
But when I tag my anxiety is high,
Running from Security Officers n sh*t
I be taggin till i die
I know the last couple of verses didn’t rhyme,
But nobody’s perfect,
I make mistakes from time to time,
But it doesn’t stop me from dropping the dimes.
That’s the end of my rap,
Scars swell on my back,
From being forced to the ground by Cops when I got caught doing Graff,
Word
x Tranz 4 Life x